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Cedar & Sage Coffee — Example

Coffee shop · Warm · editorial. Every step below is inspectable, and anything we weren't sure about is labelled rather than smoothed over.

What we started from

  • Owner-supplied: business name, that they roast their own beans, and that they open early on weekends.
  • Found by us: a Google Business Profile, a mostly-inactive Instagram, and an old one-page site with a broken contact form.

Verified sources — and the contradictions we didn't paper over

  • Weekday hoursVerified

    Value: Mon–Fri 7:00am–6:00pm

    Source: Google Business Profile + door signage photo

  • Sunday hoursContradiction — held back

    Value: held back

    Source: Profile says 8:00am–1:00pm; Instagram bio says 'closed Sundays'

    Two sources disagree, so we did not publish a Sunday time — we asked the owner instead of guessing.

  • In-house roastingUnverified — not published yet

    Value: not rendered as a claim yet

    Source: Owner statement, no third-party corroboration

    Kept out of the live copy until the owner confirms it in the approval step.

Concrete conversion diagnosis

  • Phone number is an image, not a tap-to-call link

    Evidence: 0 of the site's mobile visitors could call in one tap; 71% of the profile's traffic is mobile.

    Fix: Render the number as a real tel: link in the header and contact block.

  • Hours are buried below three scrolls

    Evidence: 'What time do they open?' is the top question in the profile's Q&A — answered nowhere above the fold.

    Fix: Move a verified hours panel into the first screen.

  • Contact form posts to a dead endpoint

    Evidence: Submissions 500 and are lost; the owner never sees them.

    Fix: Replace with a working request form wired to email + the owner dashboard.

Private preview (nobody else can see it yet)

Composed from the verified facts only. This is the real Stage-1 composer output — the same engine a paying customer gets — not a mockup:

cedar-sage-coffee-example

Cedar & Sage Coffee — Example

Your local cafe in Riverton OR.

Call us today
  • Espresso & CoffeeHouse-roasted beans pulled to order.
  • Fresh PastriesBaked in-house every morning.
  • Cozy SeatingFree Wi-Fi and a spot to stay a while.
Real composer output · version “Classic” · section order: hero → about → services → hours → contact

Owner approval diff

Nothing launches until the owner signs off. Here is exactly what they changed — corrections and removals, not just additions:

  • Open Sundays 8:00am–1:00pm

    Sunday: by the owner — 8:00am–12:00pm

    Why: Owner resolved the source contradiction; we published only the confirmed time.

  • Family-owned since 1998

    (removed)

    Why: Owner could not substantiate the year, so we cut the claim rather than ship an unverifiable one.

  • House-roasted beans pulled to order

    House-roasted beans pulled to order (owner-confirmed)

    Why: Owner confirmed the roasting claim in review, so it moved from unverified to published.

Launch — a human accountable, not a button

Went live at cedarsage-coffee.example. Went live after the owner approved the diff. The domain is registered to the owner, not to PitchSite.

Measured afterwards

Tap-to-call clicks
34 / mo
was 0 (number was an image)
Directions requests
58 / mo
was not tracked before
Working form submissions
12 / mo
was 0 (form was broken)

Illustrative figures for a fictional demo business — not a real customer's measured results.